I want to be
with her
always;
In happiness,
to smile with her,
and be the one
to hug her near.
In sadness,
to cry with her,
and be the one
to dry her tears.
When I fall in love,
I will spend my
every waking
and sleeping
moments
with her
and catch each
moment in its
eternally
lovely
form.
When I fall in love,
I will miss her
the very moment
I say 'goodbye'
and my heart
will yearn for
the very moment
I say hello'.
When I fall in love,
all my old hurts
and pains
will seem
lost and
faded
away
and I will be
strong and
brave
once
again.
When I fall in love,
I want you
to be happy
always, ever
and feel like
the happiest
person
of them
all . . .
Because that's
what I will feel,
when I fall in love,
with you.
July 3, 2010 at 10:56 PM
I want to be with her always;...
Oh my, you'll definitely suffocate her :) .
When I fall in love, all my old hurts
and pains will seem lost and
faded away
Are you sure it works like this?? Aren't you are expecting too much. Sorry to bust your bubble Love is not cure all :( . Its lots of hard work. Relationships are real hard work are you willing to do all the work?? :)
...and I will be strong and brave once again.
So you mean to say you re not strong and brave now but will be in future if you find the right person?
How about becoming the right person your self??
http://girlsguidetosurvival.wordpress.com/is-it-love-or-addiction/
Just kidding. Good attempt. Keep it real so that everyone can relate to it and not feel disappointed in the end if things turn out differently.
Peace,
Desi Girl
July 5, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Thank you for your comment.
every word you read in this poem was my feelings:). I believe if you are in true love you spend time with your loved once in happiness and sadness:). i think love is the best medicine and love makes u forget all your pain, worries...
but yet in times to come we falter and the same love becomes our pain, worry and liability.
So i think you are also right. We have to become the right person for ourselves :).